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Describe your role model, who is your role model

Describe your role model, who is your role model qL3E5

For a role model I must select my mother. She is the single most important human in my life, the reason I am alive, the reason I am who I am. My mother’s kindness and love allowed me to flourish and grow strong. In addition to her kindness, my mom is realistic and intelligent. The conversations that I had with my mother, taught me how to communicate effectively and shaped my perspective on the world around me. While she shaped my personality and psychology my mother also fed and clothed me as well as my siblings and provided us all a beautiful home to live in. My mother is my role model in a thousand different ways and I am honored to be her son.

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 select my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmomparent
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important
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love
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 me to flourish and grow strong. In addition
 to her kindness, my mom is realistic and intelligent. The conversations that I had with my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmomparent
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, taught me how to communicate effectively
 and shaped my perspective on the world around me. While she shaped my personality and psychology my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmomparent
mother
also
 fed and clothed me as well
 as my siblings and provided us all a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
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live
 in. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmomparent
mother
 is my role model in a thousand This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
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 to be her son. 