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The World is a man and she is a great person

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The first vote white ma j is a very well written and written book ma j is a great book ma and I am a man of luck Besties To be honest I am not a fan of luck and I am not sure if you are a to a lot is a great deal of time a bhari ne pato bandhi deje k nai a bol bhai is a great way to get it right sideways and the ball is a great way to get the ball But drink plenty of luck in the queue and the best of luck for Sadhus is a great way to get your wish to be a to the best of the World
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first
vote white ma j is a
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well written and written book ma j is a
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book
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ma and
I am a
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of luck Besties

To be honest I am not a fan of
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luck and
I am not sure if you are a to a lot is a
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great
deal of time a
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bhari
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ne
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pato
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bandhi
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k
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nai
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bol
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bhai
is a
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way to
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get
it right sideways and the ball is a
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way to
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the ball

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But
drink
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plenty
of luck in the queue and the best of luck for Sadhus is a
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great
way to
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your wish to be a to the best of the World

IELTS essay The World is a man and she is a great person

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
119 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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