The woman expresses her opinion about the career fair. Report her opinion and explain the reasons that she gives for having that opinion. v.1
The woman expresses her opinion about the career fair. Report her opinion and explain the reasons that she gives for having that opinion. v. 1
Big industries are more in numbers now a days. As they are producing the goods for the city and the mankind. But the location is also matters a lot for the its growth. Since from one decade the air pollution is also increased by some industrial waste, so according to me it should be on the outside are of the city because the merits of it is more than its demerits.
Firstly, the industries are happen to be located in the less populated area for the number of reasons. As far as, environmental issues and health of the public concern, the factories should be in the remotest places, because they are producing a ton of waste and chemical gases, that affects our surroundings as well as pollute the clean air. Moreover, some machines make very loud and crackling noise and sometimes it unbearable for the neighbour areas and hospitals. Due to the fact, industries should be shifted to the regional areas.
On the other hand, the it also affects negatively to the workers and work. Undoubtedly, the cost of transportation will increase, and due to its fact the prices of the product will touch the sky. Secondly, the daily wages who have to go to work on the day to day basis, they will be also affected by this, it will take more time and money for travel. For this reason, it should not be shifted so far from the cities.
In conclusion, this issue has both positive and negative sides. But the shifting of companies in the other area will make a city possibly clean and spacious. On the contrary, it also will be a reason for the high cost.
Big
industries are more in numbers
now a days
. As they are producing the
goods
for the city and the mankind.
But
the location is
also
matters a lot for
the its growth
. Since from one decade the air pollution is
also
increased by
some
industrial waste,
so
according to me it should be on the outside are of the city
because
the merits of it is more than its demerits.
Firstly
, the industries are
happen
to
be located
in the less populated area for the number of reasons. As far as, environmental issues and health of the public concern, the factories should be in the remotest places,
because
they are producing a ton of waste and chemical gases, that affects our surroundings
as well
as pollute the clean air.
Moreover
,
some
machines
make
very
loud and crackling noise and
sometimes
it
unbearable for the
neighbour
areas and hospitals. Due to the fact, industries should
be shifted
to the regional areas.
On the other hand
,
the it
also
affects
negatively
to the workers and work.
Undoubtedly
, the cost of transportation will increase, and due to its fact the prices of the product will touch the sky.
Secondly
, the daily wages who
have to
go to work on the
day to day
basis, they will be
also
affected
by this, it will take more time and money for travel.
For this reason
, it should not
be shifted
so
far from the cities.
In conclusion
, this issue has both
positive
and
negative
sides.
But
the shifting of
companies
in the other area will
make
a city
possibly
clean and spacious.
On the contrary
, it
also
will be a reason for the high cost.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes