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The way of Advertising tactics

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I am mainly former. But I also understand the latter opinion. The reason I agree so much with the first suggestion is that advertising is unknowingly seen by us. Most people have memorized songs, phrase, and catchphrases that they often hear in commercials. The store name, product name, phone number, store address, etc. are played with the song. In addition, there are many other ideas such as easy to read, easy to obtain information, and eye catching methods. From the standpoint of someone who says they do not pay attention to advertising, certainly, when I see and hear it many times, I get bored and think nothing. The poster will be there all the time and the ads will just be recurring. If you think so, once you get used to it, it will become just a photo or video. However, as I said it earlier, you have remembered that information. If you are asked "Have you seen or heard this ad? ", You probably know it. That is the effect of advertising. The products you are interested in, the effects of the stuff and how to use them are briefly summarized, and you will be able to get information in that moment. Now, advertisements are seen not only in leaflets and TV commercials, but also in various place such as games, Twitter, YouTube and so on. You have to pay to avoid seeing ads before and after game breaks and video playback. In those ways, there are almost no days when you do not see them, and you are surrounded by the ads. So, I agree with the opinion that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things.
I am
mainly
former.
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But
I
also
understand the latter opinion. The reason I
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agree
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so
much with the
first
suggestion is that advertising is
unknowingly
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seen
by us. Most
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people
have memorized songs, phrase, and catchphrases that they
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often
hear in commercials. The store name, product name, phone number, store address, etc.
are played
with the song.
In addition
, there are
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many
other
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ideas
such as easy to read, easy to obtain information, and
'eye catching' seems to be a compound adjective in front of a noun. Use a hyphen: "eye-catching".
eye catching
methods.

From the standpoint of someone who says they do not pay attention to advertising,
certainly
, when I
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see
and hear it
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many
times, I
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get
bored and
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think
nothing. The poster will be there all the time and the ads will
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just
be recurring. If you
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think
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so
, once you
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get
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used
to it, it will become
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just
a photo or video.

However
, as I said it earlier, you have remembered that information. If you
are asked
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"
Have you
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seen
or heard this ad?
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
, You
probably
know it.
That is
the effect of advertising. The products you
are interested
in, the effects of the stuff and how to
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use
them are
briefly
summarized, and you will be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
information
The usual collocation for "that moment" is "at" not "in". Did you mean "At that moment"?
in that moment
.

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Now
, advertisements are
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seen
not
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only
in leaflets and TV commercials,
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but
also
in various place such as games, Twitter, YouTube and
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so
on. You
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have to
pay to avoid seeing ads
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before
and after game breaks and video playback. In those ways, there are almost no days when you do not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
them, and you
are surrounded
by the ads.
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So
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with the opinion that advertising is
extremely
successful at persuading us to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
things.
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IELTS essay The way of Advertising tactics

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
281 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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