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Online learning is ineffective in educating students. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Online learning is ineffective in educating students. 25QMo
Education provides someone with academic, spiritual, and social education usually at school or university. Students will be taught many subjects such as Mathematics and Sciences. Other than academic subjects, students also will also be taught a variety of basic skills that help facilitate their daily life. During this pandemic, students must study online in order to avoid being exposed to covid -19. This new method of learning is ineffective in educating students. I agree with this statement because there is no face-to-face interaction and unstable connection. First of all, online learning does not provide face-to-face interaction between students and teachers. This situation causes students to quickly get bored and less motivated during online learning especially primary school students. According to research made by University of California, 60 percent from their students agreed that online learning is less interesting. If this situation continues, students will lose interest in socializing with friends because they often spend about 12 hours in front of computer or laptop. So, teachers should creatively create a enjoy environment in online class so that they are more energetic during online classes. Second, unstable connection in students' residential areas due to several factors causing online learning to be ineffective. Among the factors that disturb the stability of the internet due to Telekom Malaysia are equipment damaged by lightning or heat and power outages. Due to these factors, online learning is disrupted and students are left behind as a result of frequent interruptions. So, teachers should ensure that all students have access to a decent internet connection so that the learning process can be more efficient. In conclusion, barriers to physical contact in the classroom and internet instability is the main reason why online learning is ineffective in educating students. Malaysian need to adhere to the standard operating procedure by the Malaysian government so that students can return to school and continue their studies for a brighter future.
Education provides someone with academic, spiritual, and social education
usually
at school or university.
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will
be taught
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many
subjects such as Mathematics and Sciences. Other than academic subjects,
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students
also
will
also
be taught
a variety of basic
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skills
that
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help
facilitate their daily life. During this pandemic,
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students
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must
study
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online
in order to avoid
being exposed
to
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covid
-19. This new method of
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learning
is ineffective in educating
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students
. I
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agree
with this statement
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because
there is no face-to-face interaction and unstable connection.

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First of all
,
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online
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learning
does not provide face-to-face interaction between
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students
and teachers. This situation causes
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students
to
quickly
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get
bored and less motivated during
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online
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learning
especially
primary school
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students
. According to research made by University of California, 60 percent from their
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students
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agreed
that
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online
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learning
is less interesting. If this situation continues,
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students
will lose interest in socializing with friends
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because
they
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often
spend about 12 hours in front of computer or laptop.
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, teachers should
creatively
create
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enjoy environment in
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online
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class
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so
that they are more energetic during
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classes.

Second, unstable connection in students' residential areas due to several factors causing
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online
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learning
to be ineffective. Among the factors that disturb the stability of the internet due to
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Telekom
Malaysia are equipment damaged by lightning or heat and power outages. Due to these factors,
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online
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learning
is disrupted
and
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students
are
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left
behind
as a result
of frequent interruptions.
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So
, teachers should ensure that all
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students
have access to a decent internet connection
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so
that the
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learning
process can be more efficient.

In conclusion
, barriers to physical contact in the classroom and internet instability is the main reason why
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online
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learning
is ineffective in educating
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students
. Malaysian need to adhere to the standard operating procedure by the Malaysian
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government
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so
that
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students
can return to school and continue their studies for a brighter future.
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IELTS essay Online learning is ineffective in educating students.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
318 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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