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The way many people interact with each other has changed

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Over the years, interaction between people has changed alongside the upcoming technologies. Currently the new technologies have taken up the responsibility of connecting people via phones, laptops, emails and more. Nevertheless, we’ve studied the literature of how one communicated through letters and poetry in ancient periods. Those were some interesting times of communicating with love letters or secret strategies camouflaged with coded messages in the letters. The friendly argument of two generations in each home is evident about the fact that ways of communications have changed over the eras. The parents and especially the grandparents have a hard time coping with the new technologies for simple communication. On the other hand, millennials are hopping on every other latest trend. While some kids have been successful in aiding their elders with the communication technologies, others haven’t been patient enough to see it through with them. Innovative technologies and its countless benefits of connecting people across the world through various channels is just one side of the coin. The other side is thoughtfully advocated by the people of another era. The new methods of communication have not only caused people to be socially inactive but also lost the personal touch when connecting with someone. What once used to be a long way to go for one meet, has now turned to a one minute video call over phones. The efforts and fun lack in the latest ways. However, the ease of being present in any situation makes up for the lost touch.
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the new
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have taken up the responsibility of connecting
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people
via phones, laptops, emails and more.
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interesting times of communicating with
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letters or secret strategies camouflaged with coded messages in the letters.

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changed
over the eras. The parents and
especially
the grandparents have a
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hard
time coping with the new
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technologies
for simple
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communication
. On the
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hand, millennials are hopping on every
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other
latest trend. While
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some
kids have been successful in aiding their elders with the
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communication
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technologies
, others haven’t been patient
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it through with them.

Innovative
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and its countless benefits of connecting
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across the world through various channels is
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one side of the coin. The
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thoughtfully
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of another era. The new methods of
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have not
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caused
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people
to be
socially
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lost the personal touch when connecting with someone.

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video call over phones. The efforts and fun lack in the latest ways.
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ease
of being present in any situation
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makes
up for the lost touch.
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IELTS essay The way many people interact with each other has changed

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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