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the wave-energy machine for energy

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Given two illustraitons give information about wave-energy machine. The first one shows the structure of the machine and the second one indicates placement options of the machine. The wave-energy machine generates energy in the form of electricity by using both the air and the water flow. It can be placed either deep or shallow waters. The machine has a simple design with a turbine and three open sides. Two of the holes stand for air and one stands for water. Water enterence of the machine is faced to the direction of the wave letting water to level up whenever a wave comes. Levelling up water creates an air flow making the turbine work. The turbine is connected to the electiricity motor that generates energy. One of the two locations should be selected to set the machine up. One is shores having low building cost and other one is open sea which needs more money to install. On the other hand, former setting leads to lower output than latter one.
Given
two
illustraitons
give information about wave-energy
machine
. The
first
one
shows
the structure of the
machine
and the second one indicates placement options of the machine.

The wave-energy
machine
generates energy in the form of electricity by using both the air and the
water
flow. It can
be placed
either deep or shallow waters.

The
machine
has a simple design with a turbine and three open sides. Two of the holes stand for air and one stands for
water
.
Water
enterence
of the
machine
is faced
to the direction of the wave letting
water
to level up whenever a wave
comes
. Levelling up
water
creates an air flow making the turbine work. The turbine
is connected
to the
electiricity
motor that generates energy.

One of the two locations should
be selected
to set the
machine
up. One is shores having low building cost and other one is open sea which needs more money to install.
On the other hand
, former setting leads to lower output than latter one.
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IELTS essay the wave-energy machine for energy

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
169 words
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