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Poverty has always been a huge issue in our country, how can it be eradicated?

Poverty has always been a huge issue in our country, how can it be eradicated? JKbj6

Finding solutions for ending poverty have always been a priority in our country. Firstly, it is obvious that scarcity of income causes indigence, so the best pathway out of this issue is a well-paying job. Indeed, if the government had cared about skills more than education, people would be able to focus on their ability and be aware about how they can use it. We have seen people who has a job but they do not have enough salary, even though they are working long hours in a day and it is just because they have not been trained to be a doctor.

Finding solutions for ending poverty have always been a priority in our country. Firstly
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so
 the best pathway out of this issue is a well-paying job. Indeed
, if the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 had cared about This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 more than education, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 would be able to focus on their ability and be aware about how they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it. We have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
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people
 who Did you mean "have", "haven"? Alternatively, check whether the singular of 'people' should be used.havehaven
has
 a job This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they do not have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 salary, even though
 they are working long hours in a day and it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
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because
 they have not been trained
 to be a doctor. 