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The various type of communicating media and their strong and weak points

The various type of communicating media and their strong and weak points 25Q06
Recently, there are a number types of way to deliver the messege to society which can be divided into three categories including printing media (such as comics and books, electronic media (including radio, TV and fiml) and live action (theater). All of them have it own advantage and disadvantage when used to communicate information. Firts, printing media such as books and commics are suitble to use to deliver the information in the neigberhood which have limitation of access to electronic media or among the society that has reading habits. Among them, commics my preferable for youngster whereas book fit with eldered. Compare with others, printing media are more realible which can be enjoy without electricity. However, its application were limited by reading habit and can be used for blind pearson. Second, radio, TV and Film are pefectly applied to every one exept pearson with hearing problem. If we compare between three, radio is the simple one with provide information in form of audio that can be enjoy by blind group as well as normal person while audio TV and Film provide audio visual information which easy to understand by all of us. Additionally, the benefit of TV and radio are both of the can be used to present live report of current cituation. Electonic media is the most efective used to provide information, however, this type of media only work well if the electricity well establish. Thirdth, Live action like theater is consider as the most ancient way to deliver information but still efective today. Only larg space and no advance equipment is needed in this type of comunication. However, tremendous effort are needed to attract people come to the show. In conclusion, there are several parameters that should be considered before choosing delivery media including the audience habit and obstacle, and the availibility of infrastructure.
Recently, there are a number types of way to deliver the
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messege
to society which can
be divided
into three categories including printing
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media
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(
such as comics and books, electronic
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media
(including
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radio
, TV and
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fiml
) and
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live
action (theater). All of them have it
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own
advantage and disadvantage when
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used
to communicate
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information
.
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Firts
, printing
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media
such as books and
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commics
are
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suitble
to
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use to
deliver the
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information
in the
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neigberhood
which have limitation of access to electronic
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media
or among the society that has reading habits. Among them,
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commics
my preferable for youngster whereas book fit with
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eldered
. Compare with others, printing
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media
are more
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realible
which can be
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enjoy
without electricity.
However
, its application
were limited
by reading habit and can be
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used
for blind
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pearson
. Second,
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radio
, TV and Film are
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pefectly
applied to every one
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exept
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pearson
with hearing problem. If we compare between three,
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radio
is the simple one with provide
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information
in form of audio that can be
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enjoy
by blind group
as well
as normal person while audio TV and Film provide audio visual
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information
which easy to understand by all of us.
Additionally
, the benefit of TV and
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radio
are both of
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the
can be
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used
to present
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live
report of
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current
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cituation
.
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Electonic
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media
is the most
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efective
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used
to provide
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information
,
however
, this type of
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media
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only
work well if the electricity well establish.
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Thirdth
,
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Live
action like theater is
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consider
as the most ancient way to deliver
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information
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but
still
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efective
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today
.
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Only
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larg
space and no advance equipment
is needed
in this type of
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comunication
.
However
, tremendous effort
are needed
to attract
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people
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come
to the
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show
.
In conclusion
, there are several parameters that should
be considered
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before
choosing delivery
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media
including the audience habit and obstacle, and the
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availibility
of infrastructure.
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IELTS essay The various type of communicating media and their strong and weak points

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