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The value of grandparents should not be underintimated. Do you agree or disagree

The value of grandparents should not be underintimated. aV6W7
It is frequantly argued that ancestor’s worth may not be deapreciated. I completely agree with this opinion. First off all, t believe that grandparents are a factor contribute to significant relational benefits for a family. In other word, they can often set up opinions about ways to handle the tentions of family life, which help their offspring turn over a great lead in the future. In addition, because of having more life experiences where can be helpful sources of strength, information and wisdom, grandparents are a well place to give good advices which is less younger owned. For example, person who living with grandparents having a positive outlook when he was a child, will properly inharited by way of healthy life, thus, achieve the succes what his expectation. Secondly, they are our living link with the past- of a family, a region and a country, which bring to the high valuable education of nation for younger generations. Moreover, they’re the keepers of local traditions such as native sounds, habits and customs of where they was born and grown and then impartting the great pespective about culture and history fatherland for descendents. For instance, in Tet holidays, Vietnamese families definately visit their ancestor’s graves due to conventions passes from through the generations following guided by their grandparents. In conclusion, I strongly expect that always teach children ought to keep an eye on grandparents and look up to their, which contribute child’s personality is developing on today and soon.
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frequantly
argued that ancestor’s worth may not be
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deapreciated
. I completely
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agree
with this opinion.

First
off all, t believe that
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grandparents
are a factor contribute to significant relational benefits for a
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family
. In other word, they can
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often
set up opinions about ways to handle the
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tentions
of
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family
life, which
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help
their offspring turn over a great lead in the future.
In addition
,
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because
of having more life experiences where can be helpful sources of strength, information and wisdom,
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grandparents
are a well place to give
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good
advices which is
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less younger
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owned
.
For example
, person who living with
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grandparents
having a
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positive
outlook when he was a child, will
properly
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inharited
by way of healthy life,
thus
, achieve the
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succes
what his expectation.

Secondly
, they are our living link with the past- of a
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family
, a region and a country, which bring to the high valuable education of nation for younger generations.
Moreover
, they’re the keepers of local traditions such as native sounds, habits and customs of where they
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was
born and grown and then
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impartting
the great
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pespective
about culture and history fatherland for
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descendents
.
For instance
, in Tet holidays, Vietnamese
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families
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definately
visit their ancestor’s graves due to conventions passes from through the generations following guided by their grandparents.

In conclusion
, I
strongly
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expect
that always teach children ought to
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keep
an eye on
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grandparents
and look up to their, which contribute child’s personality is developing on
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today
and
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soon
.
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IELTS essay The value of grandparents should not be underintimated.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
247 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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