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The social situation, and the feasibility of restructuring the camps

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The results of the survey showed that 61% of the residents live in neighborhoods that include relatives. As for the degree of kinship, the results were as shown in Figure 4 shown below. We note that the largest percentage of the degree of kinship is brothers because most of the displaced families left the country together, and therefore when settling in the camps, they chose the adjacent dwelling to visit the state of family bonding in situations of displacement. Because of the importance of this, the residents' desire to restructure the camps to include neighborhoods containing relatives will be discussed in the focus groups.

The results of the survey This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 that 61% of the residents This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in neighborhoods that include relatives. As for the degree of kinship, the results were as shown in Figure 4 shown below. We note that the largest percentage of the degree of kinship is brothers This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 most of the displaced families This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 the country together, and therefore
 when settling in the camps, they chose the adjacent dwelling to visit the state of family bonding in situations of displacement. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 of the importance of this, the residents' desire to restructure the camps to include neighborhoods containing relatives will be discussed
 in the focus groups. 