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The UNHCR (2021) Report on the influx of Syrians After 10 years of crisis, life is more difficult than ever for displaced Syrians. Millions of Syrians have been forced to flee their homes since 2011, in search of safety as refugees in Lebanon, Turkey, Jordan and abroad, or have been displaced inside Syria, knowing that the number of internally displaced people has reached 6.7 million interlay displaced people living in tents and temporary housing.

The UNHCR (2021) Report on the influx of Syrians After 10 years of crisis, life is more difficult than ever for displaced Syrians. Millions of Syrians have been forced to flee their homes since 2011, in search of safety as refugees in Lebanon, Turkey, Jordan and abroad, or have been displaced inside Syria, knowing that the number of internally displaced people has reached 6. 7 million interlay displaced people living in tents and temporary housing. gxALd
The UNHCR (2021) Report on the influx of Syrians After 10 years of crisis, life is more difficult than ever for displaced Syrians. Millions of Syrians have been forced to flee their homes since 2011, in search of safety as refugees in Lebanon, Turkey, Jordan, and abroad, or have been displaced inside Syria, knowing that the number of internally displaced people has reached 6. 7 million interlay displaced people living in tents and temporary housing.
The UNHCR (2021) Report on the influx of Syrians After 10 years of crisis, life is more difficult than ever for displaced Syrians. Millions of Syrians have
been forced
to flee their homes since 2011, in search of safety as refugees in Lebanon, Turkey, Jordan, and abroad, or have
been displaced
inside Syria, knowing that the number of
internally
displaced
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.
has
reached 6. 7 million interlay displaced
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
living in tents and temporary housing.
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IELTS essay The UNHCR (2021) Report on the influx of Syrians After 10 years of crisis, life is more difficult than ever for displaced Syrians. Millions of Syrians have been forced to flee their homes since 2011, in search of safety as refugees in Lebanon, Turkey, Jordan and abroad, or have been displaced inside Syria, knowing that the number of internally displaced people has reached 6. 7 million interlay displaced people living in tents and temporary housing.

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