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Some people believe that death penalty should be brought back for peace and security. do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that death penalty should be brought back for peace and security. VEyMK
When thinking about capital punishment, I face the dilemma that whether it would be enforced. In my opinion, to provide the safety of community and reduce crime rate, life imprisonment should be replaced with death penalty. I am not in favor of people who do a brutal murder or a vicious harassment and later they receive a light sentence. Firstly, such criminals would obtain a punishment tooth for a tooth and eye for and eye. And thus, these killers would be penalized such as they have committed a suicide. This will be also a consolation for a victim’s family. Secondly, if a delinquent has some psychopathic problems, this reason can help them to be released from prison in the next decades. As long as such offenders keep on living in a prison, people who has undergone to violence will be always into a lot of dread. How international organizations deal with massive crime processes? In 2002, International Crime Court (ICC) was established in order to strive against myriad violation of the law. On the other hand, there are several countries such as Iran, Iraq, Saudi Arabia and Pakistan where an execution is still applied. Despite these restrictions, sometimes such an interesting paradox might arise. In these countries, precautions can quench a large number of homicides, but they are not enough to eliminate at all. Most of Middle Asia countries are top of these statistics. As a matter of fact that I consider this decision should be used in being charged of a crime with a person who causes the death of a plenty of people. I can take Adolf Eichmann who arranged the death of hundreds of people during World War II as an example. After the war he was stood trial and hung in Israel. To sum up, capital punishment gives a life insurance to crime victims survived and helps to decline barbaric murders especially like domestic violence, sexual rape in the World.
When thinking about capital punishment, I face the dilemma that whether it would
be enforced
. In my opinion, to provide the safety of community and
reduce
crime
rate, life imprisonment should
be replaced
with death penalty.

I am not in favor of
people
who
do a brutal murder or a vicious harassment and later they receive a light sentence.
Firstly
, such criminals would obtain a punishment tooth for a tooth and eye for and eye. And
thus
, these killers would
be penalized
such as they have committed a suicide. This will be
also
a consolation for a victim’s family.
Secondly
, if a delinquent has
some
psychopathic problems, this reason can
help
them to
be released
from prison in the
next
decades. As long as such offenders
keep
on living in a prison,
people
who
has
undergone to violence will be always into
a lot of
dread.

How international organizations deal with massive
crime
processes? In 2002, International
Crime
Court (ICC)
was established
in order to strive against myriad violation of the law.
On the other hand
, there are several countries such as Iran, Iraq, Saudi Arabia and Pakistan where an execution is
still
applied. Despite these restrictions,
sometimes
such an interesting paradox might arise. In these countries, precautions can quench
a large number of
homicides,
but
they are not
enough
to eliminate at all. Most of Middle Asia countries are top of these statistics.
As
a matter of fact that I consider this decision should be
used
in
being charged
of a
crime
with a person
who
causes the death of a
plenty
of
people
. I can take Adolf Eichmann
who
arranged the death of hundreds of
people
during World War II as an example. After the war he
was stood
trial and hung in Israel.

To sum up, capital punishment gives a life insurance to
crime
victims survived and
helps
to decline barbaric murders
especially
like domestic violence, sexual rape in the World.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that death penalty should be brought back for peace and security.

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