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The two pie charts show below average household expenditure in Japan and malaysia in the year of 2010

The two pie charts show below average household expenditure in Japan and malaysia in the year of 2010 V0rdA

The provided two pie chart illustrates the half money spent on various household necessities during Malaysia and Japan in 2010. The units are measured in%Overall, after analysis it both cause food housing and good and service were the main to costly while, both nations spent least on health careIt is clearly seen that from the chart in Malaysia the greatest proportion of expenditure 34 was on houseing on the contrary, in Japan housing accounted for just 21% of total followed by in Japan the greatest single expense was other goods and services at 29% compared with 26 in MalaysiaMoreover, food came in second place in Japan at 24% likewise, in Malaysia the actual proportion was higher 27% in Japan another major expense was transport at 20% however this was much lower in malaysia 10% surprisingly, in both regions the smallest ratio of expenditure was on health care

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