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The two pictures illustrate the road that access to a city hospital between 2007 and 2010.

The two pictures illustrate the road that access to a city hospital between 2007 and 2010. RRDnQ

The two pictures illustrate the road that access to a city hospital between 2007 and 2010. Generally speaking, it is clear that public car park, circle road, and bus station have built, improving than before that the previous was made for empty land and small facilities such as a bus stop, while the city hospital not been renovated. Looking at the first changed in the picture, it can be seen that the bus station is built in the southwest side in 2010 that it used for free land and bus stop in 2007 period. Next, the staff car park is improved, replacing the bus stop in the southeast area in the year of 2010. Moreover, the public car park have been built beside the city hospital in the east. Last, the roundabout have been increased for 2 ring that combined city road, hospital road, and ring road, while the city hospital not changed.

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road
 that access to a city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 between 2007 and 2010.

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 speaking, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
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road
, and bus station have built, improving than This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 that the previous was made
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small
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stop
, while the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 not been renovated
.

Looking at the first
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changed
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seen
 that the bus station is built
 in the southwest side in 2010 that it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for free land and bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 in 2007 period. Next
, the staff car park is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
, replacing the bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 in the southeast area in the year of 2010. Moreover
, the public car park have been built
 beside the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 in the east. Last, the roundabout have been increased
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ring
 that combined city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
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road
, and ring You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
, while the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
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changed
. 