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The Effects of Overeating

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Overeating affects weight gain and obesity, increases dangerous diseases, causes fatigue, drowsiness and loss of confidence. Firstly, overeating effected unwanted weight gain. When you eat more than what is required by the body, it leads to a condition where the body has to work more to digest the food, and store the excess energy and fats for later use. Accumulation of more fat in the body leads to weight gain and obesity. Secondly, being overeting has health risks. Obesity can lead to heart disease, diabetes, and other conditions. The quality of life suffers, as it is difficult to enjoy exercise or move.
Overeating affects weight gain and obesity, increases
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dangerous
diseases, causes fatigue, drowsiness and loss of confidence.
Firstly
, overeating effected unwanted weight gain. When you eat more than what
is required
by the body, it leads to a condition where the body
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has to
work more to digest the food, and store the excess energy and fats for later
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use
. Accumulation of more
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fat
in the body leads to weight gain and obesity.
Secondly
, being
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overeting
has health
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risks
. Obesity can lead to heart disease, diabetes, and other conditions. The quality of life suffers, as it is difficult to enjoy exercise or
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move
.
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IELTS essay The Effects of Overeating

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
102 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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