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The two maps show the radical changes that Happy Valley Shopping Center underwent during the period between 1982 and 2012.

The two maps show the radical changes that Happy Valley Shopping Center underwent during the period between 1982 and 2012. Dwm0j

The given map illustrate the changes happened in Happy Valley shopping center over the period of 30 years. Overall, it can be seen from the provided pictures that during the given period several changes can be observed. Shopping center has been modernised and improved. It is clearly observed that in 1982, around the shopping center have so many trees and the was a lake however in 2012 the trees were flattened and the furniture retail was built on the site of the lake. The parking lot was introduced in front of the shop. There have also many changes inside the building. Firstly, the entrance was redeveloped. Secondly, the coffee shop was removed.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 map illustrate the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 happened in Happy Valley shopping center over the period of 30 years. Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 from the provided pictures that during the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 period several This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 can be observed
. Shopping center has been Possible spelling mistake. 'modernised' is British English.modernized
modernised
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
. It is clearly
 observed that in 1982, around the shopping center have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 trees and Please check whether a word is missing between 'the' and 'was' or whether 'the' is the correct determiner.
the
 was a lake however
 in 2012 the trees were flattened
 and the furniture retail was built
 on the site of the lake. The parking lot was introduced
 in front of the shop. There have also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 inside the building. Firstly
, the entrance was redeveloped
. Secondly
, the coffee shop was removed
. 