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I want this course free because l live in Turkey and, my country has a big currency crisis right now. Turkish liras is going bad everyday muchly. Me as a student, I have scholarship which is approximately 1000 dolar per year as of the moment I wrote and it is decrasing day by day because of I have taken this scholarship in Turkish liras. If I take this course for 40 dollar per month, I will have 520 dollar to spend for all the other things yearly. To make clear this situation in your mind, minimum wage in Turkey is 3000 TL monthly, which is equal 250 dollar right now. So, the price of this course is almost one fifth of minimum wage. I think, It is obvious that the student who is studying in Turkey at these days can not afford this much money monthly. Best regards, thank you for your goodwill. I am a electrical engineering student and I am getting focus on computer science more likely than power or automation technologies. I want to work in data science field when I graduate. I choose my elective lessons in this way. Therefore, if i will take this course, it would be very helpful while I am taking my college lectures. I will learn both at the same time. So, I think that this course is very good first step to begin this specialize and carry on. It will help me to being qualified as much as a data analyst who could work in a good company such as Google.
I want this
course
free
because
l
live
in Turkey and, my country has a
big
currency crisis right
now
. Turkish
liras
is going
bad
everyday
muchly
. Me as a student, I have scholarship which is approximately 1000
dolar
per year as of the moment I wrote and it is
decrasing
day by day
because of I
have taken this scholarship in Turkish
liras
. If I take this
course
for 40
dollar
per month, I will have 520
dollar
to spend for all the other things yearly. To
make
clear
this situation in your mind, minimum wage in Turkey is 3000 TL monthly, which is equal 250
dollar
right
now
.
So
, the price of this
course
is almost one fifth of minimum wage. I
think
, It is obvious that the student who is studying in Turkey at these days can not afford this much money monthly. Best regards, thank you for your goodwill.

I am
a
electrical engineering
student and
I am getting focus on computer science more likely than power or automation technologies. I want to work in data science field when I graduate.
I
choose my elective lessons in this way.
Therefore
, if
i
will take this
course
, it would be
very
helpful while I am taking my college lectures. I will learn both at the same time.
So
, I
think
that this
course
is
very
good
first
step to
begin
this specialize
and carry on. It will
help
me to
being qualified
as much as a data analyst who could work in a
good
company
such as Google.
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IELTS essay request for financial aid scholarship program

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
261 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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