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request for financial aid scholarship program

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I want this course free because l live in Turkey and, my country has a big currency crisis right now. Turkish liras is going bad everyday muchly. Me as a student, I have scholarship which is approximately 1000 dolar per year as of the moment I wrote and it is decrasing day by day because of I have taken this scholarship in Turkish liras. If I take this course for 40 dollar per month, I will have 520 dollar to spend for all the other things yearly. To make clear this situation in your mind, minimum wage in Turkey is 3000 TL monthly, which is equal 250 dollar right now. So, the price of this course is almost one fifth of minimum wage. I think, It is obvious that the student who is studying in Turkey at these days can not afford this much money monthly. Best regards, thank you for your goodwill. I am a electrical engineering student and I am getting focus on computer science more likely than power or automation technologies. I want to work in data science field when I graduate. I choose my elective lessons in this way. Therefore, if i will take this course, it would be very helpful while I am taking my college lectures. I will learn both at the same time. So, I think that this course is very good first step to begin this specialize and carry on. It will help me to being qualified as much as a data analyst who could work in a good company such as Google.

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 this situation in your mind, minimum wage in Turkey is 3000 TL monthly, which is equal 250 Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: "dollars".dollars
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