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The two floor plans demonstrate the AAA accontancy's main office renovation.

The two floor plans demonstrate the AAA accontancy's main office renovation. XqyLA
Generally at the beginning the AAA accountants office consisted of several offices whereas in the end the offices were replaced with more desks and rest area. however the lunch room, meeting room and the managers office mentained the same located as before renovation. In the beginning, the front desk was located on the south west area, while the accounts office, processing office and the new customers office were located on the northern part of the building with the lunch room on the north east area, the meeting room and the managers office located on the eastern and south east part respectively. The payroll office and the storage rooms were placed at the central part of the building. In the end, after renovation, at the desk area there was addition of sofas. the account office to the north west replaced with the storage area. the processing area and the new customers desk were demolished to give way for new desks. in addition the payroll office was demolished to make way for a sofa and an extra desk. the storage area was replaced by two copiers and fax. However the lunch room on the north east area, the meeting room Placed on the east and manager's office on the south east part of the building remained unchanged.
Generally
at the beginning the AAA accountants
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office
consisted of several
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offices
whereas in the
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end
the
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offices
were replaced
with more
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desks
and rest
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area
.
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however
the lunch
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room
, meeting
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room
and the
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managers
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office
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mentained
the same
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located
as
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before
renovation.

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desk
was
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located
on the
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south west
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area
, while the
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accounts
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office
, processing
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office
and the new
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customers
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office
were
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located
on the northern
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part
of the building with the lunch
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room
on the
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north east
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area
, the meeting
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room
and the
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managers
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office
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located
on the eastern and
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south east
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part
respectively
. The payroll
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office
and the storage
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rooms
were placed
at the central
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part
of the building.

In the
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end
, after renovation, at the
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desk
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area
there was addition of sofas.
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the
account
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office
to the
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north west
replaced with the storage
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area
.
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the
processing
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area
and the new
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customers
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desk
were demolished
to give way for new
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desks
.
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in
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addition
the payroll
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office
was demolished
to
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make
way for a sofa and an extra
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desk
.
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the
storage
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area
was replaced
by two copiers and fax.
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However
the lunch
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room
on the
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north east
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area
, the meeting
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room
Placed on the east and manager's
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office
on the
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south east
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part
of the building remained unchanged.
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IELTS essay The two floor plans demonstrate the AAA accontancy's main office renovation.

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3 paragraphs
215 words
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