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Disorder when learning online

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Disorder when learning online By: …. . Date and time: October 26th, 2021 at 05: 20 Current mood: I’m confused (⑉• •⑉)‥ During the COVID-19, lots of schools are providing online classes. * While with online courses, I can’t interact with teachers, it will result in the abate of interest for me to study moreover and be more lethargic. * Besides, the potential threat of technology to the health of students and professors. I mean, online courses require to form me to spend hours at a computer or tablet, which can damage my vision and increase my stress level. * Furthermore, studying through the internet, sometimes I can misunderstand knowledge from teachers because this process is the lacks face-to-face interaction and I just ask questions by sending text messages to my teachers. It’s hard for me to understand. * Online learning means there will be extra classes online that means I have to spend extra hours sitting in front of the computer studying for extra lessons. In addition, the homework also makes me only able to hold the computer 24/7. What should I do to protect my eyes? In conclusion, online learning may be the best solution for now because of covid 19, but I don't expect it to last. Online courses may suit some people, for some, it may not be.
Disorder when learning online

By: ….
.


Date and time: October 26th, 2021 at 05: 20

Current
mood: I’m confused (
⑉•
•⑉
)‥

During the COVID-19, lots of schools are providing
online
classes.

* While with
online
courses, I can’t interact with teachers, it will result in
the abate
of interest for me to study
moreover
and be more lethargic.

*
Besides
, the potential threat of technology to the health of students and professors. I mean,
online
courses require to form me to spend hours at a computer or tablet, which can damage my vision and increase my
stress
level.

*
Furthermore
, studying through the internet,
sometimes
I can misunderstand knowledge from teachers
because
this process is the lacks face-to-face interaction and I
just
ask questions by sending text messages to my teachers. It’s
hard
for me to understand.

*
Online
learning means there will be extra classes
online
that means I
have to
spend extra hours sitting in front of the computer studying for extra lessons.
In addition
, the homework
also
makes
me
only
able to hold the computer 24/7. What should I do to protect my eyes?

In conclusion
,
online
learning may be the best solution for
now
because
of
covid 19
,
but
I don't
expect
it to last.
Online
courses may suit
some
people
, for
some
, it may not be.
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IELTS essay Disorder when learning online

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
222 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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