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The diagrammatic picture shown gives information about how electricity is produced in Hydroelectric power station.

The diagrammatic picture shown gives information about how electricity is produced in Hydroelectric power station. dl36p
The diagrammatic picture shown gives information about how electricity is produced in Hydroelectric power station. Looking at the details, it can be seen that there are eight stages starting from damming up the water coming from the river in high-level reservoir to providing electricity to building in an area by national grid. At the beginning of the process, water coming from a river is dammed up to reserve it in high-level reservoir after which reserved water flows through a special intake that is opened during the daytime and closed at night. Once intake has been opened in the daytime, water flows through it to Power station where water spins reversible turbines to generate electricity. After that in reversible turbines water operates the generator to produce the electricity and flows to Low-level reservoir. At this point, generated electricity production is sent to national grid by power lines to supply electricity to people in the area. Then, water, reserved in Low-level reservoir, is returned by pumping and flows through intake into high-level reservoir at night.
The diagrammatic picture shown gives information about how
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electricity
is produced
in Hydroelectric power station.

Looking at the
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details
, it can be
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seen
that there are eight stages starting from damming up the
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water
coming from the river in high-level
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reservoir
to providing
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electricity
to building in an area by national grid. At the beginning of the process,
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water
coming from a river
is dammed
up to reserve it in high-level
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reservoir
after which reserved
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water
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flows
through a special intake that
is opened
during the daytime and closed at night. Once intake has
been opened
in the daytime,
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water
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flows
through it to Power station where
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water
spins reversible turbines to generate
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electricity
. After that in reversible turbines
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water
operates the generator to produce the
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electricity
and
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flows
to Low-level
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reservoir
. At this point, generated
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electricity
production is
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sent
to national grid by power lines to supply
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electricity
to
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people
in the area. Then,
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water
, reserved in Low-level
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reservoir
,
is returned
by pumping and
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flows
through intake into high-level
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reservoir
at night.
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IELTS essay The diagrammatic picture shown gives information about how electricity is produced in Hydroelectric power station.

Essay
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173 words
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