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People are becoming ever more use natural resources with cruelty, such as disboscation, actions like clearing a wide area of trees. This essay will discuss one of the problems losing of natural beauty marks by human activity and suggest a viable solution.

People are becoming ever more use natural resources with cruelty, such as disboscation, actions like clearing a wide area of trees. This essay will discuss one of the problems losing of natural beauty marks by human activity and suggest a viable solution. LbLaR
People are becoming ever more use natural resources with cruelty, such as disboscation, actions like clearing a wide area of trees. This essay will discuss one of the problems losing of natural beauty marks by human activity and suggest a viable solution. Nature and our planet are our common home. For example, someone planted one tree in one season, and someone cut down a full forest to improve their financial situation. And many do it illegally. The laws of forest management should determine the purpose of the deforestation of the forest and give a report to the people in the form of a public article for which each tree was cut down. And where are these trees delivered. To get rid of such big problems as deforestation that harm the ecological system of our planet, firstly, it begins of educating schoolchildren and students how to relate to the environment. If we do not explain for our children about relationship with nature, educate them changing ecosystem, when these children grow up, they will not think about planet eco condition. Organize an event or competition with cash prizes to motivate pupils or students, projects how to solve problems with nature. It can be not only among teenagers or children. It may also among adults. In my opinion, in such cases, protecting global projects can solve many problems with nature. Moreover, people are well aware of many problems. We can create any law, nevertheless everyone should start with themselves to protect nature. Only on this way we can try to stop widespread deforestation in the world.
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are becoming ever more
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natural resources with cruelty, such as
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disboscation
, actions like clearing a wide area of
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trees
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losing of natural beauty marks by human activity and suggest a viable solution.

Nature and our planet are our common home.
For example
, someone planted one
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tree
in one season, and someone
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cut
down a full forest to
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improve
their financial situation. And
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many
do it
illegally
. The laws of forest management should determine the purpose of the deforestation of the forest and give a report to the
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people
in the form of a public article for which each
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tree
was
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down. And where are these
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delivered.

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rid of such
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big
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problems
as deforestation that harm the ecological system of our planet,
firstly
, it
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begins
of educating schoolchildren and students how to relate to the environment. If we do not
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explain
for our children about relationship with
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nature
, educate them changing ecosystem, when these children grow up, they will not
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think
about planet
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condition. Organize an
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or competition with cash prizes to motivate pupils or students, projects how to solve
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with
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nature
. It can be not
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teenagers
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among adults. In my opinion, in such cases, protecting global projects can solve
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many
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problems
with
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nature
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everyone should
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start
with themselves to protect
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nature
.
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Only
on this way we can try to
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widespread deforestation in the world.
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IELTS essay People are becoming ever more use natural resources with cruelty, such as disboscation, actions like clearing a wide area of trees. This essay will discuss one of the problems losing of natural beauty marks by human activity and suggest a viable solution.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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