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Integrated essay. Electoral college syatem.KAPLAN'S

Integrated essay. Electoral college syatem. KAPLAN'S 3a7YY

The summary of the lecture can be understood as the three points those are considered to be the flaws of the electoral college system by the lecturer. He terms the system as the complex process of electing the president of the United States, which takes place once in every 4 years, because he is skeptical about the role of will of the people involved in this process. The lecturer agrees with the passage to some extent regarding the population of smaller and larger states affecting the votes. However the professor states that this kind of system affects the final outcome depending solely u. . .

The summary of the lecture can be understood
 as the three points those are considered
 to be the flaws of the electoral college system by the lecturer. He terms the system as the complex process of electing the If the term is a proper noun, use the suggested capitalization.President of the United States
president of the United States
, which takes place once in every 4 years, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 he is skeptical about the role of will of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 involved in this process.

The lecturer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesces
agrees
 with the passage to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 extent regarding the population of smaller and larger states affecting the votes. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 the professor states that this kind of system affects the final outcome The verb 'to depend' requires the preposition '(up)on':  "depending on".depending on
depending
solely
 u. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
Don't put a space before the full stop.
.