The things we learn from our friends are more important than what we learn from our family. v.2
The things we learn from our friends are more important than what we learn from our family. v. 2
Some people say we can learn a lot with our friends. They state each of friends have a plentiful of information to transmit to us. Other think otherwise. They say that our parents are the source of information. They think because our parents are older than our friends, they know much more. After weighing the evidence, it is right to say that our friends have much more knowledge to teach us.
Admittedly, there are some advantages in thinking that our parents are better than our friends. First, the father is an engineer. Therefore, you get the knowledge about how to construct a house or an airplane. Second, your mother is a lawyer. Thus, you know the rules of your country. Moreover, you know who is acting honestly and who is taking advantages from the others.
However, still I should say that our friends are the source of knowledge. Because you have many friends, you can get a lot of knowledge. One is scientist. Therefore, you ought to suppose if there is life on Mars. You may know if it is going to be possible to develop a machine to transport people from one location to another. Furthermore, you have a friend who is doctor. Thus, you should know how the life has been developing through the centuries. Another friend knows a lot about computers. Therefore, you are able to create computers.
Moreover, there are friends who are starting the under graduation. They are supposed to know some news to be succeeded in the test. So, you can keep actualized about what is happening in the world at the moment. Another one knows other languages. Thus, you are able to travel abroad and you are able to get other friends.
Finally, we should talk to our friends to be informed about what we want to know. Because they are many, we may acquire details in many areas. Besides, they know the details of the subjects.
Some
people
say we can learn a lot with our
friends
. They state each of
friends
have
a plentiful of
information to transmit to us. Other
think
otherwise
. They say that our parents are the source of information. They
think
because
our parents are older than our
friends
, they
know
much more. After weighing the evidence, it is right to say that our
friends
have much more
knowledge
to teach us.
Admittedly
, there are
some
advantages in thinking that our parents are better than our
friends
.
First
, the father is an engineer.
Therefore
, you
get
the
knowledge
about how to construct a
house
or an airplane. Second, your mother is a lawyer.
Thus
, you
know
the
rules
of your country.
Moreover
, you
know
who
is acting
honestly
and
who
is taking advantages from the others.
However
,
still
I should say that our
friends
are the source of
knowledge
.
Because
you have
many
friends
, you can
get
a lot of
knowledge
. One is scientist.
Therefore
, you ought to suppose if there is life on Mars. You may
know
if it is going to be possible to develop a machine to transport
people
from one location to another.
Furthermore
, you have a
friend
who
is doctor.
Thus
, you should
know
how the life has been developing through the centuries. Another
friend
knows
a lot about computers.
Therefore
, you are able to create computers.
Moreover
, there are
friends
who
are starting the under graduation. They
are supposed
to
know
some
news to
be succeeded
in the
test
.
So
, you can
keep
actualized about what is happening in the world at the moment. Another one
knows
other languages.
Thus
, you are able to travel abroad and you are able to
get
other friends.
Finally
, we should talk to our
friends
to
be informed
about what we want to
know
.
Because
they are
many
, we may acquire
details
in
many
areas.
Besides
, they
know
the
details
of the subjects.
19Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes