During life we are affected by different people such as friends and family. Although our friends help us to grow and learn about social environment, the great role of family in building our basic characteristics and believes should not be disregarded. The following statement supports this point of view.
Undoubtedly, friends influence our immediate lifestyle such as what to wear or how to behave others. Since, in any periods of our lives, we are in communication with peers who hold particular thoughts. And therefore, at those definite ages we are affected by those specific notions. In addition, after childhood people are more interested in experiencing new things and learning more about the world outside the domestic environment. And consequently they accept and follow their friends’ ideas and features more willingly.
However, family members especially parents have some fundamental and lasting influences on children. First, they learn the children about their long term life. They assist their children how to think and guide them in deciding for their future career. Second, they construct the children’s attitude towards life and establish their creeds and thinking. For instance, parents can create the belief in children that learning and studying would be highly valuable, while they have always encourage the children’s curiosity.
In conclusion, besides the important effect of friends in our life, we definitely learn essential lessons from our family which help us to carry out our duties.
During
life we
are
affected
by
different
people
such as
friends
and
family
. Although our
friends
help
us to grow and learn about social environment, the great role of
family
in building our basic characteristics and believes should not
be disregarded
. The following statement supports this point of view.
Undoubtedly
,
friends
influence our immediate lifestyle such as what to wear or how to behave others. Since, in any periods of our
lives
, we are in communication with peers who hold particular thoughts. And
therefore
, at those
definite
ages we are
affected
by those specific notions.
In addition
, after childhood
people
are more interested in experiencing new things and learning more about the world outside the domestic environment. And
consequently
they accept and follow their
friends’
ideas
and features more
willingly
.
However
,
family
members
especially
parents have
some
fundamental and lasting influences on
children
.
First
, they learn the
children
about their long term
life
. They assist their
children
how to
think
and guide them in deciding for their future career. Second, they construct the
children’s
attitude towards
life
and establish their creeds and thinking.
For instance
, parents can create the belief in
children
that learning and studying would be
highly
valuable, while they have always
encourage
the
children’s
curiosity.
In conclusion
,
besides
the
important
effect of
friends
in our
life
, we definitely learn essential lessons from our
family
which
help
us to carry out our duties.
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19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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