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Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.17

Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 17
People differ in their opinion if we need to learn history. Many people think that history subject is not important. However, I disagree with such views because I strongly believe that our past teaches us more about the present. Hence, when people say that learning from past time does not make sense for present living, I totally disagree. First, I think learning mistakes from past is one way to make better future. Some people who always learn from the past will not do the same thing again. They try to analyse the cause of mistakes and try to repair their own mistakes. Thus, people can choose to learn history. On the other hand, others believe that the past teaches us nothing. Because they don’t want to remember your past mistakes and miss the point. To summarise, it can be said that it is important for future. Because learning from past can make people more careful to face their present lives, so, they have power to face the world.
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differ in their opinion if we need to learn history.
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people
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think
that history subject is not
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important
.
However
, I disagree with such views
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because
I
strongly
believe that our
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past
teaches us more about the present.
Hence
, when
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people
say that learning from
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past time
does not
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make
sense for present living, I
totally
disagree.

First
, I
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think
learning
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mistakes
from
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past
is one way to
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make
better future.
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Some
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people
who always learn from the
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past
will not do the same thing again. They try to
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analyse
the cause of
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mistakes
and try to repair their
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own
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mistakes
.
Thus
,
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people
can choose to learn history.

On the other hand
, others believe that the
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past
teaches us nothing.
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Because
they don’t want to remember your
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past
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mistakes
and miss the point.

To
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summarise
, it can
be said
that it is
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important
for future.
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Because
learning from
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past
can
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make
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people
more careful to face their present
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lives
,
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so
, they have power to face the world.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS essay Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 17

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
168 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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