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The The flowchart illustrates the production of sweaters in a clothing industry in Bangladesh.

The The flowchart illustrates the production of sweaters in a clothing industry in Bangladesh. BlAgj
The The flowchart illustrates the production of sweaters in a clothing industry in Bangladesh. In an overview the production of sweater has several stages from collection of yarn to the shipment of the product. According to the flowchart the yarns are collected and sent for distribution after winding. From there it is divided in two stages. Firstly, knitting of the sweater is done and then online inspection is done which is further sent to the linking of panels. Following the stages these sweaters are send to another online inspection of linking panels. Then trimmed. After which light checking and mending is done. Here if any problem is found then those are sent back to the winding. On the other hand holes are made to the sweater after it pass the mending, light checking. Then it is sent for the washing, labelling and ironing the factory quality.
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The The
flowchart illustrates the production of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sweaters
in a clothing industry in Bangladesh.

In an overview the production of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sweater
has several stages from collection of yarn to the shipment of the product.

According to the flowchart the yarns
are collected
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
for distribution after winding. From there it
is divided
in two stages.
Firstly
, knitting of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sweater
is done
and then online inspection
is done
which is
further
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
to the linking of panels.

Following the stages these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sweaters
are
Consider using a past participle here: "sent".
send
to another online inspection of linking panels. Then trimmed. After which light checking and mending
is done
. Here if any problem
is found
then those are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
back to the winding.
On the other hand
holes
are made
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sweater
after it pass the mending, light checking. Then it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
for the washing, labelling and ironing the factory quality.

IELTS essay The The flowchart illustrates the production of sweaters in a clothing industry in Bangladesh.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
146 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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