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Lesson planning reflective writing

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As I chose the subject of vocabulary for lesson planning it took quite much time to find a proper topic as the students were pretty high language level learners. And after analyzing my thoughts I came to a conclusion to teach new words regarding the topic of household tools, kitchen utensils and hardware tools to be precise, which we have not learned before. Traditionally, I started with greeting and asking questions about the topic. Subsequently, to check their knowledge and warm up I divided them into 2 groups and asked to write as many tools as they remember. They were very active and the winner team got 19 words in 2 minutes. Next I started my lesson. I taught new words such as tongs, spatula, skillet for kitchen utensils and wrench, hatchet, screwdriver for hardware tools. Then to make sure that my students remembered them I switched to the following activity where I distributed sheets of papers which new words were written on. They each had to answer the question "What are you used for? " It was quite entertaining and educational activity where they had to remember the learnt words and give their own definition to them. And last but not least, I gave the task of matching the pictures to the words which was focused on kitchen utensils. And the student "Amaniyazova Dilnoza" got the most answers "17" out of "18". In the end, I thanked my students for being so active and were glad that they were all engaged, and gave the instructions to the homework of crossword puzzle on the vocabulary of hardware tools. Although it was quite demanding and challenging experience, I feel like I learned a lot from it: teaching job is not as easy as it may seem.
As I chose the subject of vocabulary for lesson planning it took quite much time to find a proper topic as the
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students
were pretty high language level learners. And after analyzing my thoughts I came to a conclusion to teach new words regarding the topic of household
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tools
, kitchen utensils and hardware
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tools
to be precise, which we have not learned
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before
.
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with greeting and asking questions about the topic.
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check
their knowledge and warm up I divided them into 2 groups and asked to write as
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many
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tools
as they remember. They were
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very
active and the winner team
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got
19 words in 2 minutes.
Next
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started
my lesson. I taught new words such as tongs, spatula, skillet for kitchen utensils and wrench, hatchet, screwdriver for hardware
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tools
. Then to
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make
sure that my
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students
remembered them I switched to the following activity where I distributed sheets of papers which new words
were written
on. They each had to answer the question
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What are you
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It was quite entertaining and educational activity where they had to remember the
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words and give their
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definition to them. And last
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not least, I gave the task of matching the pictures to the words which
was focused
on kitchen utensils. And the
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student
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Dilnoza
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"
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the most answers
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17
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out of
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. In the
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, I thanked my
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students
for being
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active and were glad that they were all engaged, and gave the instructions to the homework of crossword puzzle on the vocabulary of hardware
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tools
. Although it was quite demanding and challenging experience, I feel like I learned a lot from it: teaching job is not as easy as it may seem.
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IELTS essay Lesson planning reflective writing

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
295 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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