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The television generates violence in society

The television generates violence in society VrDX3

Nowdays the media have a strong influence on our life. Some people claim that the television should have an educational role in the society like the school. However, in my opinion, the television has the scope of the entertaining, and these two purposes are not compatible. To clarify the point, the television shows are thinked for a lot of different people and different tastes, and for these reason they could never have the same educational scope. However, on balance, I am convinced that the violence that is generated from the Television is limited to a few weak persons, because if you have a strong personality, you won't be influenced by what you are seeing. Finally, it is important to remember to have a critical behaviour and try to listen and to read he same thing from different sources.

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