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Speaking of weather preference, it’s definitely sunny weather with the blue sky and a few clouds floating slowly. It does wonders for my mood to sit outside and enjoy the sunshine. There are always tons of things I can do during nice weather like that. One of my favorite things is cycling with my friends and my family on a long bike path alongside a beautiful river. It’s fantastic when we can breathe in fresh air, and enjoy the sparkling sun on the water or the beautiful sculptures made of all kinds of plants in an enormous park near my neighborhood. What’s more, drawing on my balcony while sunbathing I definitely that it’s an absolute must to do on warm & sunny days. I always have endless ideas when I do that. So, those are all the reasons why I like sunny days. They’ll not give me a gloomy feeling like rainy or snowy days. Instead, they always make myself more energetic.
Speaking of weather preference, it’s definitely sunny weather with the blue sky and a few clouds floating
slowly
. It does wonders for my mood to sit outside and enjoy the sunshine.

There are always tons of things I can do during nice weather like that. One of my favorite things is cycling with my friends and my family on a long bike path alongside a
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beautiful
river. It’s fantastic when we can breathe in fresh air, and enjoy the sparkling sun on the water or the
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beautiful
sculptures made of all kinds of plants in an enormous park near my neighborhood.

What’s more, drawing on my balcony while sunbathing I definitely that it’s an absolute
After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use "must" or "have to" here.
must to
do on warm & sunny days. I always have endless
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ideas
when I do that.

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So
, those are all the reasons why I like sunny days. They’ll not give me a gloomy feeling like rainy or snowy days.
Instead
, they always
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make
myself more energetic.

IELTS essay describe a kind of weather you like

Essay
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4 paragraphs
162 words
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