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The tabular illustrates information about the proportion of area was overlayed by trees in the selected four nation Australia, New Zealand, Brazil and canada in the year of 1999 and 2005.

The tabular illustrates information about the proportion of area was overlayed by trees in the selected four nation Australia, New Zealand, Brazil and canada in the year of 1999 and 2005. KnOBR
Overall, lot of changes were were there in given four countries, however highest percentage of earth was covered by forest in Brazil as compared to other nations in the given time period. It is clear seen that approximately 21. 9 Shored was envelop in Australia by the year of 1990, after that it was a declined only 0. 6 % in 2005. although, a minor difference was seen in both year by the nation of New Zealand. Moving towards the rest of description, the highest percentage of zones was tucked by Woodland which was comprised of 62. 2 percent in 1990. In contrast, it followed the plummet trend about 57. 2 percent in 2005. whereas, 20. 4% and 22. 5% land was covered by forest in canada from 1990 to 2005, respectively.
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changes
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were were
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four countries,
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highest percentage of earth
was covered
by forest in Brazil as compared to other nations in the
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time period. It is
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that approximately 21. 9
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Shored
was
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envelop
in Australia by the year of 1990, after that it was a declined
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0. 6 % in 2005.
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although
, a minor difference was
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seen
in both year by the nation of New Zealand. Moving towards the rest of description, the highest percentage of zones
was tucked
by Woodland which
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was comprised of
62. 2 percent in 1990.
In contrast
, it followed the plummet trend about 57. 2 percent in 2005.
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whereas
, 20. 4% and 22. 5% land
was covered
by forest in
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canada
from 1990 to 2005,
respectively
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IELTS essay The tabular illustrates information about the proportion of area was overlayed by trees in the selected four nation Australia, New Zealand, Brazil and canada in the year of 1999 and 2005.

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