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The internet may not be the best place to find information.

The internet may not be the best place to find information. le5wo
It is said that the internet may not be the best place to search for data or other material. In my point of view, the internet helps us a lot in finding data from every source. I completely disagree with the statement. This essay will outline my reasons why I disagree that the internet may not be the best place to find information. The first reason why I think the internet is the best to find information is that it contains everything from every source. For example: people need to research their work. They find the information from the internet because the internet contains what they need. They rarely go out to the stores to find it. Clearly, it can show that the internet is much more convenient for us to find information. Secondly, the internet is like a helping hand to improve study by searching information through many platforms. For instance: due to the current mental health problem, students have to study from home. Some students cannot catch up with the lessons, so they have to do some research to find more information that relates to the lesson. Obviously, you might be helped in your study by the information you get online. In conclusion, there is a lot of evidence to show that the internet is the best place to find information or data. The internet helps people to find information and can improve their studies. I believe the internet is very useful and helpful for people to live a better life.
It
is said
that the internet may not be the
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best
place to search for data or other material. In my point of view, the internet
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helps
us a lot in finding data from every source. I completely disagree with the statement. This essay will outline my reasons why I disagree that the internet may not be the
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best
place to
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find
information.

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first
reason why I
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think
the internet is the
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best
to
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find
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information
is that it contains everything from every source.
For example
:
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people
need to research their work. They
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find
the
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information
from the internet
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because
the internet contains what they need. They rarely go out to the stores to
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find
it.
Clearly
, it can
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show
that the internet is much more convenient for us to
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find
information.

Secondly
, the internet is like a helping hand to
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improve
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study
by searching
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information
through
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many
platforms.
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: due to the
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current
mental health problem, students
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have to
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study
from home.
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Some
students cannot catch up with the lessons,
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so
they
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do
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some
research to
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more
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information
that relates to the lesson.
Obviously
, you might be
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helped
in your
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by the
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you
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online.

In conclusion
, there is
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a lot of
evidence to
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show
that the internet is the
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best
place to
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find
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information
or data. The internet
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helps
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people
to
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information
and can
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improve
their
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studies
. I believe the internet is
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very
useful and helpful for
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people
to
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live
a better life.
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IELTS essay The internet may not be the best place to find information.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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