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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. v.1

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.
The major mode of transportation globally is the road and its havoc is rampant. Consequently, some believe that minimising the optimum speed limits is the most appropriate way to curb accidents on the highway while others think there are other suitable ways to do this. In my opinion, I believe that although introducing speed breaker in cars is a good way out, but other approaches such as regular eye checks and fixing of bad roads will help reduce the menace. On the one hand, some people opine that the introduction of a speed limit will assist in reducing the mishaps on the roads. In other words, since the vehicle cannot move beyond recommended kilometre per hour, the driver is able to control acceleration and the application of the breaks will be prompt. Moreover, driving within a specific moving rate gives the driver the ability to manoeuvre controllably in case of unforeseen interception by other road users, eventually, averting road accidents. For instance, the interstate transporting companies in Nigeria have introduced this into their vehicles and as a result, the occurrence of these ugly events has reduced drastically. On the other hand, others think there are more appropriate approaches and I stand with this. Firstly, regular visit to the ophthalmologist will help correct eye defects and inadvertently minimize collisions such as running into another vehicle or impediments ahead. Secondly, fixing of potholes and bad spots. That is to say when the ways are void of all these, the journey will be itch-free and there would not be a need for users to want to avoid them thereby no result of somersaulting while trying to dodge them. For example, the Federal Road Safety Corps in Nigeria reported that 65% of RTAs (road traffic accidents) occur when drivers try to dodge potholes. In conclusion, despite the varying views on how to keep the roads safe, I am of the opinion that regular eye checks and good roads are top notches in mitigating this hurdle.
The major mode of transportation globally is the
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road
and its havoc is rampant.
Consequently
,
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some
believe that
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minimising
the optimum speed limits is the most appropriate
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way
to curb accidents on the highway while others
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think
there are
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other
suitable
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ways
to do this. In my opinion, I believe that although introducing speed breaker in cars is a
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good
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way
out,
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but
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other
approaches such as regular eye
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checks
and fixing of
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bad
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roads
will
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help
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reduce
the menace.

On the one hand,
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some
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people
opine that the introduction of a speed limit will assist in reducing the mishaps on the
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roads
. In
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other
words, since the vehicle cannot
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move
beyond recommended
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kilometre
per hour, the driver is able to control acceleration and the application of the breaks will be prompt.
Moreover
, driving within a specific moving rate gives the driver the ability to
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manoeuvre
controllably
in case of unforeseen interception by
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other
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road
users,
eventually
, averting
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road
accidents.
For instance
, the interstate transporting
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companies
in Nigeria have introduced this into their vehicles and
as a result
, the occurrence of these ugly
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events
has
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reduced
drastically
.

On the
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other
hand, others
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think
there are more appropriate approaches and I stand with this.
Firstly
, regular visit to the ophthalmologist will
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help
correct eye defects and
inadvertently
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minimize
collisions such as running into another vehicle or impediments ahead.
Secondly
, fixing of potholes and
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bad
spots.
That is
to say when the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ways
are void of all these, the journey will be itch-free and there would not be a need for users to want to avoid them thereby no result of somersaulting while trying to dodge them.
For example
, the Federal
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Road
Safety Corps in Nigeria reported that 65% of
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RTAs
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(road
traffic accidents) occur when drivers try to dodge potholes.

In conclusion
, despite the varying views on how to
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keep
the
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roads
safe, I am of the opinion that regular eye
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checks
and
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good
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roads
are top notches in mitigating this hurdle.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
331 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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