In the whole world, the level of qualification of an individual is measured by the subjects what they had learnt. Some people believe that the youngster should study all subjects till their secondary level education. Other folks support to learn and focus on any particular subject to develop the attraction towards that subject and acquire a deep knowledge. I strongly support that the latter point would structure the student's career path with more accuracy for their success.
Firstly, teenagers should fix their goal in the lower secondary level education to start to work on their plans. When they study every subject, they cannot fix the focus on only one or two subjects, which make a question in their upcoming studies where to focus. For example, Oxford University had research on this issue and given that most of the youngsters could not select their field of tertiary education. So, the mismatch path makes the student's future into darkness. By focusing on one or two subjects from secondary education can brighten the student to choose the appropriate path to achieve a successful career.
Secondly, the time spend to study a particular subject is less, and the extra time can be used to develop skills want to be needed for life. For example, the left out time apart from studies can be used to learn how to cook or how to manage the responsibility etc. Each individual's behaviour influences with this life learning activities. Moreover, the youngster can spend more time with their parents and the bond between them become stronger than the previous ones.
In conclusion, instead of making the offsprings to learn every subject to get a mix of unbalanced knowledge, the individual can keep the focus point on one or two subjects and make the profession into one particular field to obtain greater success.
In the whole world, the level of qualification of an individual
is measured
by the
subjects
what they had
learnt
.
Some
people
believe that the youngster should
study
all
subjects
till their secondary level
education
. Other folks support to learn and
focus
on any particular
subject
to develop the attraction towards that
subject
and acquire
a deep knowledge
. I
strongly
support that the latter point would structure the student's career path with more accuracy for their success.
Firstly
,
teenagers
should
fix
their goal in the lower secondary level
education
to
start
to work on their plans. When they
study
every
subject
, they cannot
fix
the
focus
on
only
one or two
subjects
, which
make
a question in their upcoming
studies
where to
focus
.
For example
, Oxford University had research on this issue and
given
that most of the youngsters could not select their field of tertiary
education
.
So
, the mismatch path
makes
the student's future into darkness. By focusing on one or two
subjects
from secondary
education
can brighten the student to choose the appropriate path to achieve a successful career.
Secondly
, the
time
spend to
study
a particular
subject
is less, and the extra
time
can be
used
to develop
skills
want to
be needed
for life.
For example
, the
left
out
time
apart from
studies
can be
used
to learn how to cook or how to manage the responsibility etc. Each individual's
behaviour
influences with this life learning activities.
Moreover
, the youngster can spend more
time
with their parents and the bond between them become stronger than the previous ones.
In conclusion
,
instead
of making the
offsprings
to learn every
subject
to
get
a mix of unbalanced knowledge, the individual can
keep
the
focus
point on one or two
subjects
and
make
the profession into one particular field to obtain greater success.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes