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The table below gives information about the percentage of land covered by forest in various countries in 1990 and 2005 with estimated figures for 2015
Many people have stated that we should search for strategies to live with climate change without fixing it. I fully disagree with this idea and for this essay will examine the reasons that can prove this statement is not right. First of all, Climate change can cause the huge damage on animals such as extinction and lack of places to live because due to climate change the world is getting hotter and most water bodies are drying so there are not many places for water animals to live. Even, for animals which live on tree because of burning forest it does not have many places for them to live and it can lead to extinction. For instance, For polar bears, they live only in cold place such as pole but most of the coldest places are melting and it can create a huge impact of losing polar bears in the future. Climate change is the biggest reason of why many animals have extincted. Secondly, There are many problems for the Earth in the future if we do not fix it now because climate change can cause many serious problem only if we keep on trying to living through it without finding a way to help the Earth. Nowadays, there are many serious problems that have damaged the world already if more problems to come, it can affect humans and animals even more. For example, Climate change changes the weather to hotter. In addition, In 2019, there was a burning fire in Australia and it killed a lot of trees, plants and many living animals that can lead to many more problems such as extinction of koalas and the increasing of toxic smoke. Another way to say that many problems are ready to arrive and damage us all if we do not find a way. In conclusion, Climate change is much serious than we can think of. Therefore, The statement is totally wrong because it can make animals extinct and cause serious prolems if people keep on ignoring this problem.
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and for this essay will examine the reasons that can prove this statement is not right.

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can cause the huge damage on
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such as extinction and lack of
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the world is getting hotter and most water bodies are drying
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there are not
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on tree
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of burning forest it does not have
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and it can lead to extinction.
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such as pole
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are melting and it can create a huge impact of losing polar bears in the future.
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change
is the biggest reason of why
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have extincted.

Secondly
, There are
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for the Earth in the future if we do not
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the Earth. Nowadays, there are
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, it can affect humans and
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the weather to hotter.
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trees, plants and
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living
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are ready to arrive and damage us all if we do not find a way.

In conclusion
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is much
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extinct and cause
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IELTS essay The table below gives information about the percentage of land covered by forest in various countries in 1990 and 2005 with estimated figures for 2015

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
339 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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