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The tabal below shows the number of tourists and their total spending in five countries France usa Spain China italy the period covered from 2012 to 2013 .

The tabal below shows the number of tourists and their total spending in five countries France usa Spain China italy the period covered from 2012 to 2013. kYgqn
The tabular data illustrates the variations, number of commuter and their total spending on France, USA, spain, china and Italy where they utilised their spending throughout the period of 2012 and 2013. The statics are measured in billions and millions. From the overall analysis, the greater number of travelers were recorded in france in the year of 2013, while in USA the most spending was invested by tripper in the given some period as well as whole trend displayed rising tendency. The flleething glance makes it wet evideut that 83. 0 and 84. 7 millions of people who invested their income from 53. 6 to 56. 1 billion in france during a period of 2 year. In contrest 66. 7 and 69. 8 million spending on USA the figure heverd below 140 billion in the given period. In term of spain country from 56. 3 to 60. 4 billion spending was consumed by 57. 5 to 60. 7 million people in 2012 and 2013. On further scurting, China was noticed the highest spending in 2013 as against it was preferred by 57 7 to 55. 7 traveellers who spent their expenditure nearly 55. 0 billion to 51. 7 billion respectively in the preference of Italy country it had greater intrested of commuters (47. 7) who spend 43. 9 million in period of 2013. However in previous year same country was cheaper by 46. 4 million people at 41. 2 billion spending.
The tabular data illustrates the variations, number of commuter and their total
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spending
on France, USA,
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spain
, china and Italy where they
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utilised
their
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spending
throughout the
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period
of 2012 and 2013. The statics
are measured
in
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billions
and
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millions
. From the
overall
analysis, the greater number of travelers
were recorded
in
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france
in the year of 2013, while
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in USA
the most
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spending
was invested
by tripper in the
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given
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some
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period
as well
as whole trend displayed rising tendency. The
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flleething
glance
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makes
it wet
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evideut
that 83. 0 and 84. 7
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millions
of
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people
who invested their income from 53. 6 to 56. 1
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billion
in
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france
during a
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period
of 2 year. In
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contrest
66. 7 and 69. 8
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million
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spending
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on USA
the figure
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heverd
below 140
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billion
in the
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given
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period
. In term of
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spain
country from 56. 3 to 60. 4
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billion
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spending
was consumed
by 57. 5 to 60. 7
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million
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people
in 2012 and 2013. On
further
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scurting
, China
was noticed
the highest
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spending
in 2013 as against it
was preferred
by 57 7 to 55. 7
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traveellers
who spent their expenditure
nearly
55. 0
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billion
to 51. 7
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billion
respectively
in the preference of Italy country it had greater
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intrested
of commuters (47. 7) who spend 43. 9
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million
in
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period
of 2013.
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However
in previous year same country was cheaper by 46. 4
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million
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people
at 41. 2
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billion
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spending
.
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IELTS essay The tabal below shows the number of tourists and their total spending in five countries France usa Spain China italy the period covered from 2012 to 2013.

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