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being a celebrity-such as famous film star or sports personality -brings problems as well as benefits.

being a celebrity-such as famous film star or sports personality -brings problems as well as benefits. g5bXD
yes, celebrity or players has both good and bad impacts in his/her life. film star and sports person are entertainers in our daily life because we can imagine in his/her life by thinking i am that person how we live. film star and players main key is behavior and attitudes toward fan. if he/she do not show any humble and gives bad impression. in newspaper and internet, he/she will get bad image and prospective views and may affect his/her life. And, if he/she will be top actor or player lifestyle will be luxurious and betterment in life. it talks about fame and personality of life. if he/she gets a popular every people shall know from a different nations. it also generates income. different collaboration will be there if he/she will be popular. some bad impacts as my point of view, he/she will gets personal issues in life by not maintaining any health, balanced diet, family, relationship and others problems. according to other person he/she will not get any ordinary life like they live free and live as like as they want. they can do suicide in nepotism(in recent news shusant rajput he dies from overthinking and lack of ideas. )so it is main cause of actor or players or any persons. at last, the main objectives is we should or want do a good things to make us happy. do it. every person is beautiful in own views. so, we should compare to other.
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yes
, celebrity or
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players
has both
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good
and
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impacts in his/her
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life
.
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film
star and sports
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person
are entertainers in our daily
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life
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because
we can imagine in his/her
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life
by thinking
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i
am that
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person
how we
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live
.
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film
star and
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players
main key is behavior and attitudes toward fan.
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if
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he/she
do not
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show
any humble and gives
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bad
impression.
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in
newspaper and internet,
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he/she
will
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get
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bad
image and prospective views and may affect his/her
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life
. And, if
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he/she
will be top actor or
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player
lifestyle will be luxurious and betterment in
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life
.
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it
talks about fame and personality of
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life
.
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if
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he/she
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gets
a popular every
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people
shall know from a
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different
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nations
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it
also
generates income.
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different
collaboration will be there if
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he/she
will be popular.
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some
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bad
impacts as my point of view,
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he/she
will
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gets
personal issues in
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by not maintaining any health, balanced diet, family, relationship
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and others
problems.
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according
to other
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person
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he/she
will not
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get
any ordinary
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life
like they
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live
free and
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live
as like as they want.
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can do suicide in nepotism(in recent news
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shusant
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rajput
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from overthinking and lack of
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ideas
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so
it is main cause of actor or
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players
or any
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persons
.
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at
last, the main objectives is we should or
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want do
a
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good
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things
to
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make
us happy.
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do
it. every
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person
is
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beautiful
in
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own
views.
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so
, we should compare to other.
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IELTS essay being a celebrity-such as famous film star or sports personality -brings problems as well as benefits.

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  American English
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