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Some people think if students are afraid of the teacher it is better. Others say that having a friendly relation is better. Discuss both points and give your opinion?

Some people think if students are afraid of the teacher it is better. Others say that having a friendly relation is better. PVEdg
Teachers are the persons who teach their students about study and other social habits. However, it is thought by a stratum of people that pupil should be afraid by the teachers while others oppose it and they consider that students should be treated friendly in schools. This essay will describe about both the perspectives with their views in the subsequent paragraphs. To begin with, one of the vital causes of the teachers for being strict with their students is that the children never go out of discipline and therefore they complete their home work and any other tasks of school on time. Moreover, some students bunk their classes and it may cause adults to be addicted to drugs after getting in bad company however, strictness of teachers can avoid them. For example, if a teacher maintains and records the attendance of every person then classes would not be bunked by them. On the other hand, too much strictness of teacher can make students fearful and due to the fact of it they will not discuss their problems with the them. In addition to it, friendly nature of teachers help to build a good relation between students and teachers which comforts the children to tell their troubles in study. In my opinion, a teacher should have the quality of friendly as well as strict and they should be used accordingly. For instance, in case of serious things and discipline every teacher should act strictly on the contrary they should solve the problems of students by being friendly with them. To conclude, students are the future of the nation and so, they should be managed in proper way, consequently teachers play major role in teaching of good habits for the students.
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are the persons who teach their
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students
about study and
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other
social habits.
However
, it is
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thought
by a stratum of
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people
that pupil should be afraid by the
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teachers
while others oppose
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it and
they consider that
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students
should
be treated
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friendly
in schools. This essay will
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about both the perspectives with their views in the subsequent paragraphs.

To
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begin
with, one of the vital causes of the
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teachers
for being strict with their
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students
is that the children never go out of discipline and
therefore
they complete their home work and any
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other
tasks of school on time.
Moreover
,
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some
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students
bunk their classes and it may cause adults to
be addicted
to drugs after getting in
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bad
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company
however
, strictness of
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teachers
can avoid them.
For example
, if a
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teacher
maintains and records the attendance of every person then classes would not
be bunked
by them.

On the
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other
hand, too much strictness of
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teacher
can
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make
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students
fearful and due to the fact of it they will not discuss their problems with
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the them
.
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to it,
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friendly
nature of
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teachers
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help
to build a
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good
relation between
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students
and
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teachers
which comforts the children to
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tell
their troubles in study.

In my opinion, a
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teacher
should have the quality of
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friendly
as well
as
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strict and
they should be
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used
accordingly
.
For instance
, in case of serious things and discipline every
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teacher
should act
strictly
on the contrary
they should solve the problems of
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students
by being
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friendly
with them.

To conclude
,
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students
are the future of the nation and
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so
, they should
be managed
in proper way,
consequently
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teachers
play major role in teaching of
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good
habits for the
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students
.
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IELTS essay Some people think if students are afraid of the teacher it is better. Others say that having a friendly relation is better.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
289 words
6.0
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