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The system includes main components: Signal acquisition module: Infrared camera communicating via USB (Universal Serial Bus) Signal processing module: Raspberry Pi 3 embedded computer. The image obtained from the camera will be processed. directly on this compact embedded computer and the results are displayed on the LCD screen (liquid-crystal display) or transmitted to a phone or tablet via internal wifi connection Display, interactive module: 7 inch LCD screen Waveshare capacitive touch, Android phone or tablet
The system includes main components: Signal acquisition module: Infrared camera communicating via USB (Universal Serial Bus) Signal processing module: Raspberry Pi 3 embedded computer. The image obtained from the camera will
be processed
.
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directly
on this compact embedded computer and the results
are displayed
on the LCD screen (liquid-crystal display) or transmitted to a phone or tablet via internal
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wifi
connection Display, interactive module:
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7 inch
LCD screen
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Waveshare
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capacitive
touch, Android phone or
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tablet
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IELTS essay The system includes main components

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
74 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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