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First of all I would like thank you for invitation

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First of all I would like thank you for invitation which was extended to me. I’m very sorry, I unable to joint with you due to the exams of my last year term at university which has been scheduled on next three weeks. I know that you don’t want to listen this kind of reply. I would definitely joint if I don’t have my exams. Even though I’m not coming, I would like to introduce one of my best friend who have a free time these days. His name is Kamal and just completed his studies. In addition he is a regular watcher of moves and he really enjoys the every single moment. I can recommend him and he has been staying with me since 2010. He has a good personality and better knowledge about the film industry and history of actors. So I assume that you will understand his value and continue the journey with him. He is very emotional person.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
I would like thank you for invitation which
was extended
to me. I’m
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
sorry,
Did you mean "I am" or "I was"?
I
unable to joint with you due to the exams of my last year term at university which has
been scheduled
on
next
three weeks. I know that you don’t want to listen this kind of reply.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would definitely joint if I don’t have my exams.
Even though
I’m not coming, I would like to introduce one of my best friend who have a free time these days. His name is Kamal and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
completed his studies. In
The comma is probably missing here: "addition, he".
addition he
is a regular watcher of
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
moves and
he
really
enjoys the every single moment.

I can recommend
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
him and
he has been staying with me since 2010. He has a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
personality and better knowledge about the film industry and history of actors.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
I assume that you will understand his value and continue the journey with him. He is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
emotional person.
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IELTS essay First of all I would like thank you for invitation

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
162 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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