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The students discuss several ways to memorize vocabulary. Summarize the ways. Then state which of the ways you prefer and explain why. v.1

The students discuss several ways to memorize vocabulary. Summarize the ways. Then state which of the ways you prefer and explain why. v. 1
In the modern life, technology has impacted at all growth, one of the this effecting areas is healthcare. However, this great effect has not been reflected at physical medicine as decreasing many western countries. I will briefly discuss the reasons and possible solutions in below paragraphs. To begin with, the healthcare systems have improved with high technology devices, robots, computer based software. Also, treatments, new vaccinations against diseases, drugs have discovered and developed. All these novelties have not appeared in physical medicine. This is because, the people have a long life compared last centuries, elders can get disease easily. Even the treatments have been, older people can not recover. In addition to it, overpopulation has negative influence on it. Everybody can not access recently at the hospitals, there are so crowded. Thus, life and health standards are getting worst. On the other hand, some possible precautions are population balance in the city and countryside, personal healthcare nursing for the elders. The individual should be encouraged by the governments to live in rural areas with tax free applications or free check up. To add to the governments should be listed individuals who over 65age and their nursing should be done fast and punctual. For example, in my town, the municipality has a special line for just emergent situations. When an accident or hysteria moment occurs in an old citizen's house an ambulance and the healthcare experts visit there in order to help. In conclusion, I restate, overpopulation and older individuals health standards are getting worst, admittedly. Due to, the governments should take care of this issue supporting rural and urban activity standards, also nursing care systems should be increased. Every person deserves a mental and physical health, and authorities should be conscious in order to inhibit measures.
In the modern life, technology has impacted at all growth, one of
the this
effecting areas is healthcare.

However
, this great effect has not
been reflected
at physical medicine as decreasing
many
western countries. I will
briefly
discuss the reasons and possible solutions in below paragraphs.

To
begin
with, the healthcare systems have
improved
with high technology devices, robots, computer based software.
Also
, treatments, new vaccinations against diseases, drugs have discovered and developed. All these novelties have not appeared in physical medicine. This is
because
, the
people
have a long life compared last centuries, elders can
get
disease
easily
. Even the treatments have been, older
people
can not recover.
In addition
to it, overpopulation has
negative
influence on it. Everybody can not access recently at the hospitals, there are
so
crowded.
Thus
, life and health standards are getting worst.

On the other hand
,
some
possible precautions are population balance in the city and countryside, personal healthcare nursing for the elders. The individual should
be encouraged
by the
governments
to
live
in rural areas with
tax free
applications or free
check
up. To
add
to the
governments
should
be listed
individuals who over 65age and their nursing should
be done
fast
and punctual.
For example
, in my town, the municipality has a special line for
just
emergent situations. When an accident or hysteria moment occurs in an
old
citizen's
house
an ambulance and the healthcare experts visit there in order to
help
.

In conclusion
, I restate, overpopulation and older individuals health standards are getting worst,
admittedly
. Due to, the
governments
should take care of this issue supporting rural and urban activity standards,
also
nursing care systems should
be increased
. Every person deserves a mental and physical health, and authorities should be conscious in order to inhibit measures.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay The students discuss several ways to memorize vocabulary. Summarize the ways. Then state which of the ways you prefer and explain why. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
296 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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