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the stock market in the U.S.

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Second, in terms of changes in interest rates, a rise in interest rates could cause stocks to crash. In recent years, interest rates have remained quite low. As a result of the Fed's monetary easing policy, which also purchased a large amount of bonds, the real yield has been below 0%. This is because when the coronavirus pandemic was at its worst, the Federal Reserve was concerned that the U. S. economy would be hit harder than the Lehman shock. Federal Reserve Chairman Powell has said that he will keep interest rates low until inflation rises to 2% and employment recovers, and he has not specified a specific time frame. In the U. S. , the economy is on the road to recovery, but it is not perfect and the risk of monetary tightening by the central bank is high, leading some people to believe that interest rates will not rise for some time.
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, a rise in
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could cause stocks to crash. In recent years,
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rates
have remained quite low.
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purchased
a large amount of bonds, the real yield has been below 0%. This is
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because
when the coronavirus pandemic was at its worst, the Federal Reserve
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that the U. S. economy would
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keep
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interest
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rates
low until inflation rises to 2% and employment recovers, and he has not specified a specific time frame. In the U. S.
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the economy is on the road to recovery,
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it is not perfect and the
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of monetary tightening by the central bank is high, leading
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IELTS essay the stock market in the U.S.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
154 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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