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Many people nowadays are worried about the quality of the food they buy. What are the causes?

Many people nowadays are worried about the quality of the food they buy. What are the causes? PMlPp
In this rapidly developing society era, the quality of the food that people purchase and eat has been an issue of concern because of their intimate effects on human health. For this reason, consumers are paying more attention to the ready meals they buy and should be provided with some feasible solutions. Firstly, foods which have unguaranteed quality may cause many serious health problems such as obesity or food poisoning. People often buy take-aways such as fast food outside because they are too busy to process their own meals or simply they are lazy and they want to bolt the food down. In some cases, buying food from outside will make it impossible for us to have a balanced diet. We can become undernourished or obese because of the lack of nutrition meal we have had. Moreover, people who buy food in the stores will not be able to know how the food is prepared and whether it is safe enough to eat or not. This may lead to food poisoning immediately after using them or affect our long-term health due to the toxic substances in food, at worst causing serious diseases such as cancer. Meanwhile, people are worried about the processed food they buy. In conclusion, people should limit ordering and eating food that is pre-prepared. How wonderful it is when we have home-cooked food with our family rather than eating in a rush while the dishes we have do not guarantee quality. If people don’t have enough time to cook for themselves, it is important to watch what we eat carefully.
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rapidly
developing society era, the quality of the
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that
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people
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purchase
and eat has been an issue of concern
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because
of their intimate effects on human health.
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, consumers are paying more attention to the ready meals they
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buy
and should
be provided
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some
feasible solutions.

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,
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foods
which have
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unguaranteed
quality may cause
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many
serious health problems such as obesity or
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food
poisoning.
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People
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often
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buy
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take-aways
such as
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fast
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food
outside
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because
they are too busy to process their
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own
meals or
simply
they are
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lazy and
they want to bolt the
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food
down. In
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some
cases, buying
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food
from outside will
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make
it impossible for us to have a balanced diet. We can become undernourished or obese
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because
of the lack of nutrition meal we have had.
Moreover
,
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people
who
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buy
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food
in the stores will not be able to know how the
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food
is prepared
and whether it is safe
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enough
to eat or not. This may lead to
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food
poisoning immediately after using them or affect our long-term health due to the toxic substances in
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food
, at worst causing serious diseases such as cancer. Meanwhile,
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people
are worried
about the processed
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food
they
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buy
.

In conclusion
,
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people
should limit ordering and eating
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food
that is
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pre-prepared
. How wonderful it is when we have home-cooked
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food
with our family
rather
than eating in a rush while the dishes we have
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do
not guarantee quality. If
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people
don’t have
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enough
time to cook for themselves, it is
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important
to
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watch
what we eat
carefully
.

IELTS essay Many people nowadays are worried about the quality of the food they buy. What are the causes?

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3 paragraphs
263 words
5.0
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