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The social strata are changing and the gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider,the rich are becoming rich and the poor are becoming poorer .what do you think are the causes of this problem and suggest solutions to teckle it.

The social strata are changing and the gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider, the rich are becoming rich and the poor are becoming poorer. what do you think are the causes of this problem and suggest solutions to teckle it. aN8d
The gap between the rich and the poor is increasing day by day. Many reasons are behind that. I will highlight its causes along with solutions to solve the problems that arise from it in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, the major reason for this problem is education. Our study system does not allow the poor student to study in the best schools. Because education is extremely expensive in numerous countries. Schools have high fees format which is mandatory to follow. on the contrary the poor people cannot afford the high fees of colleges and school due to which information is inaccessible for them. Moreover, a extremely significant cause of this problem is economic condition. Financial inequality and unemployment fuel the urge of earning money through unethical and illegal means. However, ever problems can be dealt with appropriate steps. Firstly, authorities should render free education to poor people. So that they understand the meaning of education in their life. The scholarship is a must for poor intelligent student to continue the higher study. Apart from this, it is the onus of government to employ needy onus that will help to increase the level of affluence of poor people. By hammering the nail, the gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider. So, authorities should take appropriate steps to overcome this problem.
The gap between the rich and the
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reasons are behind that. I will highlight its causes along with solutions to solve the
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problems
that arise from it in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, the major reason for this
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problem
is
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education
. Our study system does not
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allow
the
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poor
student to study in the best schools.
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Because
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education
is
extremely
expensive in numerous countries. Schools have high fees format which is mandatory to follow.
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on
the contrary the
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poor
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people
cannot afford the high fees of colleges and school due to which information is inaccessible for them.
Moreover
,
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a
extremely
significant cause of this
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problem
is economic condition. Financial inequality and unemployment fuel the urge of earning money through unethical and illegal means.

However
, ever
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problems
can
be dealt
with appropriate steps.
Firstly
, authorities should render free
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education
to
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poor
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people
.
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they understand the meaning of
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education
in their life. The scholarship is a
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must
for
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poor
intelligent student to continue the higher study. Apart from this, it is the onus of
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government
to employ needy onus that will
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help
to increase the level of affluence of
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poor
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people
. By hammering the nail, the gap between the rich and the
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poor
is becoming wider.
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So
, authorities should take appropriate steps to overcome this
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problem
.
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IELTS essay The social strata are changing and the gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider, the rich are becoming rich and the poor are becoming poorer. what do you think are the causes of this problem and suggest solutions to teckle it.

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224 words
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