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The secret to the OCU is that enough to show postman in Iran the government of ir is not a good idea to be able to do these and I am

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to be in two
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different
beliefs.
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Some
individuals argued that it is rewarding to share researches in
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science
, business and
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other
academic things for
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free
. On
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contrary,
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other
said that there is a considerable number of significant information in which should not
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ahared
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owing to their values. There are rational argument in both sides of this controversial topic will
be discussed
in detail, followed by my
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own
take on the matter. On the one hand, there are those reasoning that it is beneficial to share articles, essays, and every
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kinds
of science-based things for
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free
. There are two reasons why it
is considered
as rewarding act.
Initially
, a noticeable number of
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people
in
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many
countries are not access to anything that going to give them opportunity to
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buy
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science
majors book. To illustrate,
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developing countries
such as Iran, Afghanistan and countries in African continent are obvious examples of this issue.
Ultimately
,
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because of the fact that
in this
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world adults, colleges' students,
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youngers
are not interested in
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science
things in
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very
large population, it would be
really
absorbing in terms of achieving their attention in this valid
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subject
.
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On On
the
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other
hand, the opposing view asserts that it is completely problematic to share
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science
lectures for
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free
and as a non-paid
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subject
. Since not
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only
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people
have access,
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other
scientists either, it would be an obvious
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dangerous
situation by which may have
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consequences. When something is
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free
my thing is
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it is available for every single person
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that
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some
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people
may commit a crime and abuse of knowledge that they
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get
.
Additionally
, controlling of criminals would be impossible owning to inability of all
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governments
to follow them without knowing their ID. all
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free
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subjects
are downloaded
without any bank account.
To conclude
, there are valid arguments on both sides controversy; on balance,
however
it is my firm confliction that
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science
should be
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free
for everyone,
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but
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governments
should set
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some
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rules
to identify who is using these
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IELTS essay The secret to the OCU is that enough to show postman in Iran the government of ir is not a good idea to be able to do these and I am

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
342 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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