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The Sad story about meeting

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She took a taxi to the meeting point, but it was definitely too late to meet the partner. Fortunately, the Director's Secretary helped her complete the contract signing. But unfortunately, her boss said: "You have to make a Review Form and get demoted. " That night, returning home, her husband consoled her: "This time I have worked very hard. Working at a lower level can also help relieve the pressure, which isn't too bad. "
She took a taxi to the meeting point,
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but
it was definitely too late to
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meet
the partner.
Fortunately
, the Director's Secretary
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helped
her complete the contract signing.
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But
unfortunately, her boss said:
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
You
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have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a Review Form and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
demoted.
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
That night, returning home, her husband consoled her:
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
This time I have worked
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very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
. Working at a lower level can
also
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help
relieve the pressure, which isn't too
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bad
.
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
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IELTS essay The Sad story about meeting

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
74 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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