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The rule of family when an English teenager is going to stay with your family

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One important rule in my family is that everyone doesn’t to spit on the floor, it is very unclean and my parents extremely hate it, especially my mom. Because she sweeps the floor everyday so she doesn’t like everybody make it dirty Another important rule in my family is that my dad doesn’t allow me and my younger brother go to bed after 10. 00pm and wake up before 7. 00am. Sometime I don’t like that a lot but i know my dad do it because he wants me and younger brother have good health

One This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirement
rule
 in my family is that everyone doesn’t to spit on the floor, it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 unclean and my parents extremely
 hate it, especially
 my mom. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 she sweeps the floor everyday This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 she doesn’t like everybody The pronoun 'everybody' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "makes", "made".makesmade
make
 it dirty

Another This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirement
rule
 in my family is that my dad doesn’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me and my younger brother go to bed after 10. 00pm and wake up This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 7. 00am. Sometime I don’t like that a lot This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 know my dad do it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 he wants me and younger brother have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphhealth.health!health?health:health,health;
health