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A paragraph about how people in the family share household work

A paragraph about how people in the family share household work YR92r

There are four people in my family. Because both my partents go to work and my older brother is living the Japan, we split the housework equally in the family. My dad is the healthest person in my family so he always does the heavy lifting. My mom is responsible for meals in my family and she usually shops for groceries, washes the dishes, takes out the rubbish, . . . Befor my brother went to the Japan, he and I had taken turns cleaning the house and feeding the dog. Being the younger child in my family, I often do the laundry, water the tree and sweep the house. Anyway, my family is the most important for me and I felt happy when I shared the housework with my partens as it is contribute to build happiness in my family

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