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Trees declining annually and deforestation increases. What are the causes of tjhis and which consequences it may leads.

Trees declining annually and deforestation increases. What are the causes of tjhis and which consequences it may leads. LLRwR
It is true that forests provide oxygen to people and help to control climate; while, trees are decreasing every year because of deforestation. There are several causes of it. This essay intends to analyze the reasons behind this and how it can affect individual ans society. To commence with, deforestation is rising for many reasons. First and foremost is to fulfil the need of lands. Since migration is increasing, forest has decreased. when people do not find land for housing, they cut down trees for it. Hence, individuals cut trees due to their own needs. Apart from this, another reason is trees are the source of income for many people. They use trees for not only housing facilities but also to earn money. people use the wood of trees either for cooking purposes or to make furniture. To epitome, according to a survey, which was conducted few years back, around 50%of people cut trees for houses. As a result, these are the prominent reasons of cutting down trees. On the flip side, cutting of trees may leads to various serious results. primarily, it can cause global warming. If people do not stop cutting trees then world can gets more warmer, because of this people can Face serious health issues. Moreover, trees produce oxygen. when there is no tree then there is no oxygen. Along with it, trees provide medicines which are the cure of serious diseases. so, without trees people neither get the oxygen, nor the medIcines. As a consequence, human survival would become difficult due to lack of trees. To recapitulate, deforestation can cause several problems. Despite thinking about the reasons, everyone should try to mitigate this issue by making some efforts.
It is true that forests provide oxygen to
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people
and
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help
to control climate; while,
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trees
are decreasing every year
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because
of deforestation. There are several causes of it. This essay intends to analyze the
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reasons
behind this and how it can affect individual ans society.

To commence with, deforestation is rising for
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many
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reasons
.
First
and foremost is to fulfil the need of lands. Since migration is increasing, forest has decreased.
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when
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people
do not find land for housing, they
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cut
down
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trees
for it.
Hence
, individuals
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cut
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trees
due to their
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own
needs. Apart from this, another
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reason
is
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trees
are the source of income for
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many
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people
. They
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use
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trees
for not
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only
housing facilities
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but
also
to earn money.
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people
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use
the wood of
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trees
either for cooking purposes or to
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make
furniture. To epitome, according to a survey, which
was conducted
few years back, around 50%of
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people
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cut
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trees
for
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houses
.
As a result
, these are the prominent
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reasons
of cutting down trees.

On the flip side, cutting of
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trees
may leads to various serious results.
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primarily
, it can cause global warming. If
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people
do not
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stop
cutting
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trees
then world can
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gets
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more warmer
,
because of this
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people
can Face serious health issues.
Moreover
,
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trees
produce oxygen.
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when
there is no
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tree
then there is no oxygen. Along with it,
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trees
provide medicines which are the cure of serious diseases.
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so
, without
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trees
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people
neither
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get
the oxygen, nor the
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medIcines
. As a consequence, human survival would become difficult due to lack of trees.

To recapitulate, deforestation can cause several problems. Despite thinking about the
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reasons
, everyone should try to mitigate this issue by making
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some
efforts.
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IELTS essay Trees declining annually and deforestation increases. What are the causes of tjhis and which consequences it may leads.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
283 words
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