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Government should help people, tell opiniom

Government should help people, tell opiniom AJRp3

The government should focus more on other countries people rather than helping people from our country. In my opinion government should help others but not putting our country in risk. Firstly, the people who seek help is also humans. they are also in danger. Most of these situations came due to narural calamities and disaster. also if there is war happenning among the countries. For this if we could help we should be a better nation

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should focus more on other countries This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
rather
 than helping This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 from our country. In my opinion This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 others This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not putting our country in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
.

Firstly
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who seek This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 is also
 humans. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThey
they
 are also
 in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazardrisk
danger
. Most of these situations came due to Possible spelling mistake found.natural
narural
 calamities and disaster. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?also,
also
 if there is war Possible spelling mistake found.happeninghap penning
happenning
 among the countries.

For this if we could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 we should be a better nation