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Government should help people, tell opiniom

Government should help people, tell opiniom AJRp3
The government should focus more on other countries people rather than helping people from our country. In my opinion government should help others but not putting our country in risk. Firstly, the people who seek help is also humans. they are also in danger. Most of these situations came due to narural calamities and disaster. also if there is war happenning among the countries. For this if we could help we should be a better nation
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should focus more on other countries
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people
rather
than helping
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people
from our country. In my opinion
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government
should
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help
others
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not putting our country in
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risk
.

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, the
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people
who seek
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help
is
also
humans.
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they
are
also
in
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danger
. Most of these situations came due to
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narural
calamities and disaster.
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also
if there is war
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happenning
among the countries.

For this if we could
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help
we should be a better nation

IELTS essay Government should help people, tell opiniom

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
75 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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